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actor: rahul
female actor: jhuhi

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sham ka waqt hai.... jhuhi nadi k pass ek bench main bethi hai shanti se aakho main pani hai bas nadi ko dekh rahi hai.. waha chal rahi hai barish aane ka mousam bana huya hai hali hali hawa chalne k karan jhuhi k bal hawa m halke halke ud rahe hai... achanak piche se el ladka (rahul) aata hai hasta nachte huye our bina jane jhuhi k baju main beth jata hai...  rahul jhuhi ko dekhta hai or samaj jata hai ki vo sad hai ro rahi hai.. rahul jhuhi ko puchna chahta hai ki kya huya hai but us situation main us ko hurt nahi karna chahta hai jhusi se us ki maan ki baat nikalne ki koshish karta hai

rahul:  ( aasam main dekhte huye or jore se sas lete huya) suuuu hmmmm thandi hawa kitna suhana mousam hai.. maja aa gaya
jhuhi: (abhi bhi nadi ko dekh rahi hai)
rahul: itne khushnuma mousam main yu akele bethne ka maja hi kuch our hai.. hai naa?
             shayad dard kuch jada hai isly humari baate sunai nahi deri hai kisi ko.
(jhuhi ghusse main rahul ki our dekhti hai our kuch bolne jati hai itne main rahul fatak se bolta hai)
rahul: raeee baap re lagta hai barish aane wali hai... aasman to bhik chuka bas bunde girna baki hai...
(jhuhi wapas nadi ki or dekhti hai)
rahul: pata hai.... hmm acha lagta hai jab insan rota hai.. maano jaise dard kam ho gaya hoo lekin jab aasun nikal rahe hoo par beh nahi rahe hai hoto dard or bhi badh jata hai
jhuhi: ( rahul ko dekhti hai or aasu chupane ki koshish karte huye rahul se bolti hai).. kya main aap ko janti hu
rahul: (halki si muskan laate huya) haa hum 5 min se baat kar rahe hai naa
jhuhi: (ghusse se) 5 min main kya hum dost ban gaye hai kya? plz aap jao our muje akela rehne dijiye.. muje akela rehna hai
rahul: imposible... nahi ho sakta mtlb hohi nahi sakta .. tume pata apne aap ko tum ek kamre main bhi band kar logi na to bhi tum akele nahi rahogi.. undhera tumare sath rahega khamoshi tumare sath rahegi.. our yaha dekho bahut kuch hai tumare sath sapne nadi hai jo keh rahi hai ki aaoooo or mere jaise raho.. dur chali chalo.. vo dekho upar.. aree waha nahi yaha upar ped main.. vo dekho chidiya chiv chiv kar rahi kuch na kuch keh rahi hoga tumse shayd bol rahi hogi ki rona nahi humara ghar bhig jayega hehehe.. kuch samaj rahi ho ki nahi??

jhuhi: tum apne aap ko samajte kya ho tume pata bhi hai kya.. ki kya huya hai mere sath
rahul: (muskurate huye) ha muje pata hai.. main tume bata hu tume kya huya.. tume na trust huya but khud pe nahi kisi our pe... pata hai trust karna achi baat hai
( ab thoda sad feelig k sath)  but khud se jada jada na karo
jhuhi: tum to aise bol rahe ho jaise ki tumara dil tuta ho our apne tute dil k sath dusre ko khush karne nikale hoo.. waah.. tum jaise log na bas dusro k sath khelte raho.. log kya soch rahe hai kya problm face kar rahe hai tume us se koi farak nahi apan bas gyan dene ka impression marne ka bas haana
(rahul kuch kenta itne main ek ladka waha aata hai or kehta hai ki rahul bhaiya aap ko  sab bula rahe hai tayari sab ho gai hai rahul ka hasta chehra ekdam se sad ho jata hai or apne dard ko chupate huye jhuhi ko haste huye kehta hai)
rahul: pata jab trust tutta hai naa tab bahut dard hota hai.. bt koi trust tod k or duniya se chhod k jata hai na tab our bhi jada dard hota hai.. bt is ka mtlb ye nahi ki hum apne aap ko akele kar le.. akele rehna bura nahi hai but humse jo pyar karta hai na unhe apni taklif se taklif hoti hai apne bare na kam se kam un k bare socho
(our rahul chale jata hai)
jhuhi us ladke ko pukarti hai aapne paas bulati hai
jhuhi: vo aadmi kon hai
ladka: vo mumare bhaiya hai
jhuhi: tum kyu bula rahe the un ko
ladka: vo un ki dost mar gai naa un ko jalana hai na isly unko bula raha
(our ladka toodh k chala jata hai)
(jhuhi apne aap ko kos ne se jada apne life se khush thi... or rahul jaha tha waha ja kar rahul ko dekh rahi thi.. mano us ne 15min ki bato main zena sikh liya tha.. jhuhi ne gam m bhi khushi samaj li thi.. ek din to marna sab ko to kyu aaj hi roo roo k mare)

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